War of Atrittion Critiquers

[Frank Creed]

July was for finishing War of Attrition: Book Two of the Underground.
There's a huge difference between what went out for critique and what I have now.
Before I even submitted, Cyn, that cutie of an editor, kicked it back because Legacy was not quite back yet.
New finalle.

My thanks to all who agreed to critique. Sorry for the SHORT SCHEDULE THAT WAS MY FAULT! I'm surrounded by a humble crew of talented folks. It all helped, guys.

The dedication page for this novel goes to causes, but were it like Flashpoin't's, y'all would top the list.

I owe you!

Faith,
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[Caprice]

I accept your IOU. There's even a slim chance I might try to collect one day.

I'm anxious to read the new finale.

[Frank Creed]

Write-on, Cap!
New Finalle: a still unretired Brett Favre rescues Legacy, Calamity Kid, e-girl, and Lethe.


Faith,
f

[debkinnard]

Or, how about: Brett Favre was discovered to be the singer providing the lip-synched voice at the Olympic opening ceremony? Tape at 11.

Cyn, dear -- please e-mail me off-loop. I have thanks for you and a question.

[Frank Creed]

MAN that Favre is talented!

Faith,
f

[cathikin]

Cool finale! But isn't that like Favre-ex-machina?

[cathikin]

Oh, btw, regarding dedications, Annie Bananie just replied to you on SL. She hasn't been able to get to a computer much lately.